tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4612326852844560721.post1565993765695328167..comments2023-11-01T14:14:26.011-07:00Comments on A Clean, Well-Lighted Blog: Allen Eskenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12939216580469564729noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4612326852844560721.post-20696698329025532332017-05-01T19:58:17.931-07:002017-05-01T19:58:17.931-07:00So true! Makes one round of revision all about mak...So true! Makes one round of revision all about making sure the sentences are strong enough to pull a reluctant reader all the way through your book. That way said reader is not reluctant to read your next book! I believe you have this technique down perfectly,Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794490534290259061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4612326852844560721.post-7632312049226503502017-05-01T17:56:17.161-07:002017-05-01T17:56:17.161-07:00That gives me pause for thought. Thank you.That gives me pause for thought. Thank you.Julie Seedorfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15240370907966306212noreply@blogger.com